Score: 8

"hmm........"

submission: TANKMEN 2

date: September 29, 2007

I'm glad you finally did another episode, but it just wasnt as funny as the last one. still funny, but not laugh out loud piss my pants funny like the other two.

except for that pythagorean joke, that was fuckin hilarious!

Score: 5

"nobody reads the summary"

submission: 30 Minute Challenge #2

date: August 12, 2007

st1k's was funnier. enough said. plus, his was longer, although his was just the same animation over and over.

Score: 9

"nobody reads the summary"

submission: Boy&Robot's EpicJRPGQuest

date: August 9, 2007

that was pretty damn funny. the fast-pace action and cartoony sound effects really added to the humor. i hope you make a sequal!

Score: 5

"Those drums"

submission: DJ{Scratch-N-Sniff}-Stormsynth

date: December 24, 2009

The percussion is waaaaaaaaaay too powerful, and too filtered. The lead is on the bland side.

Keep going with it.

Score: 10

"Intense"

submission: My Fish are Hungry

date: July 1, 2009

It's intense.

That dudda-funk drum beat is fucking crunchy.

10/10, 5/5

Score: 9

"hmm, this could be...."

submission: Rhode Eyeland

date: April 4, 2008

....a great gangster rap song (and it would have to be gangster rap because the beat and riffs are a lot deeper than most hip-hop). waht you need to do is replace the riff you have going at the breakdown at 00:50 with lyrics, because that's the only effect that doesn't seem to fit with a rap song.

About the baseline; it's not that the base is exactly wrong, it's just that it's not fat enough, if you get what i mean. It doesn't do anything for the song. In (good) rap and hip-hop, the bassline is the equivalent of the kick drum in techno. If it's too quiet or not contributing to the song, it lowers the enjoyability of the song.

In other words, your bassline is whack, yo.

word.